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Monday, August 30, 2010

property value (senryu)

shots reverberate
cherubs dream fireworks transformed
home sweet home for now

somewhere across town
bay windows welcome voyeurs
city living's best


  1. I love the poetic form. I've been on a kick to try different poetic forms, and this has inspired me to try out a senryu!

    oh...I'm going to add you to my blogroll. Since we are poets united and all!

  2. thanks annie. i look forward to seeing what you do with the technique. one of these days i'm going to follow the lead of our fellow group member dasuntoucha and tackle some tough stuff like chant royal or villanelle.

  3. You have been tagged!

    and there is an award for you as well!!