ardently awaiting his
e - a - c - h - a - n - d - e - v - e - r - y
1/26th
arranged into patterns
eliciting
slow whines
tingling spines
lock-picked minds
like cherished checks on an
erasable calendar
of memories
reminiscent of a junkie's endless search for another first
sweet and fleeting
as honeysuckle nectar
blessing virgin tongue
once tasted
forever bound
haunted by the bitter and beloved
afterglow
of his...
...verse
I like this and the title is wonderful.
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Pamela
I love this, lock picked minds, really gets me!
ReplyDeleteIt is such a unique poem, so many insightful ways to view it~ I love it~
haunted by the bitter and beloved
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of his...
...verse
...deep...your words definitely take the mind on journey...nuff respect...see you in 2011...ONE::
Oooooooh, "like cherished checks on an erasable calendar of memories". It cannot be said any better than that!
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