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Sunday, October 31, 2010

swimming lessons

our suffering salts oceans

submerge in it
humbled by its grandesse

swim swim swim swim
swim swim swim

buoyed by ancestral grace

then get out, dry off
live legacy

love laugh thrive

our joys float cirrus striations

6 comments:

  1. our joys float cirrus striations...

    ...look at you with the deepness of thought (^_^) luv that line...and this piece.

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  2. Very well said..!!
    keep Writing My Dear.. :)

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  3. Greetings!
    How is everything?
    Are you interested in theme writing? Do have poems related to dreams, visions, or reveries?
    If YES, welcome linking your poems to our potluck week 13 at Jingle
    Poetry : http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/
    Even if your answer is no, you are more than welcome to link in old poems, or poems unrelated to our theme (dreams, visions, or reveries) and enjoy the fun of sharing and encouraging!
    Our week 13 potluck is open Sunday, 8pm, American Central Time…We will be thrilled to see you in…
    Let me know if you have questions
    xoxox

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  4. Glad to Land at your magical poetry land today,
    How are you?

    Love your poetry talent, Please join us at Jingle Poetry Monday potluck tonight,
    First time participants can link in 1 to 3 old poems, poems unrelated to our theme are welcome!

    Sign in to follow our blog so that you are kept informed about our updates.
    Happy Sunday/Monday,
    Hope to see you in.
    xxx

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  5. I love your words. "swim swim swim swim" then "live legacy". Your last line is superb.

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