our suffering salts oceans
submerge in it
humbled by its grandesse
swim swim swim swim
swim swim swim
buoyed by ancestral grace
then get out, dry off
live legacy
love laugh thrive
our joys float cirrus striations
our joys float cirrus striations...
ReplyDelete...look at you with the deepness of thought (^_^) luv that line...and this piece.
Very well said..!!
ReplyDeletekeep Writing My Dear.. :)
insightful piece.
ReplyDeleteGlad to Land at your magical poetry land today,
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I love your words. "swim swim swim swim" then "live legacy". Your last line is superb.
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